When writing we always want to be descriptive and in business we’re conditioned to make sure that we pitch everything as the best it can be. There is no mediocre service offered by any business, only the very best.
Yet those four letters – V.E.R.Y. – can significantly dilute the impact of your writing.
Apparently I’m in tune with Mark Twain on this point, who wrote that if you substitute very for damn an editor will always remove it and your writing will be just as it should be.
I’ve written before about being a fan of brevity. Why use two words when one will do? So as my gift to you, here are a few suggestions for how you can both decrease your paragraphs and increase your impact, simply by refusing to use the word “very”.
You want to say – very beautiful
Instead use – exquisite, dazzling, striking, alluring – immediately these words create pictures in the mind’s eye and resonate because they are seldom used.
You want to say – very good
Instead use – superb, exceptional, outstanding, brilliant – because a superlative is always going to sound better than “very good”
You want to say – very bad
Instead use – atrocious, appalling, dreadful, awful, horrific – useful for your customer complaints letters and sure to hit the spot
You want to say – very quick
Instead use – rapid, swift, expeditious – these words have much more impact; you can almost feel their energy
You want to say – very happy
Instead use – delighted, thrilled, elated, ecstatic – much more impact, don’t you think?
We’ve created a graphic of very good (sorry, couldn’t help it!) substitutes for you to use as inspiration to improve your writing. Feel free to refer to it regularly (very often?)